- Well framed and interesting shots
- Good acting
- Interesting storyline
- Good presentation of idea
- Professional feel
Suggested Improvements:
- Change background music
- Colourise shots to make them stand out more
- Speed up the pace of the film
- Lighten shots as some are quite dark
Teacher comments:
- Adjust title sequence
- Fix John's looking room (framing)
- Add foley of a busy street
- Delete supermarket shot
- Add a shot of her looking towards a weapon
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