Main Task- Pitch

I chose to set my pitch as a simple, quick paced and sharp presentation because I felt it reflected the atmosphere of the film and it would provoke the same reaction from my audience. 

 I set the slides as they would appear in the film, this was to create the same feelings as they would get when watching for my film. By doing this, the feedback I gained would be useful for the construction and editing of my film.

By mentioning details such as my ideas for lighting and setting the scene I felt the audience would be more interesting in how I would go about making the films and they would be able to comment into more- such as suggestions on how they would light it etc.

Using the image of the bloodstain set up the theme for my film and I would due able to gauge the reaction from the audience as it is a key feature for creating not only suspense but the final twist at the end of the film.

Although the image used on the presentation is not of the actress I intended on using for the film, I thought it would be useful if the audience were able to properly visualise the type of actress, the shot and the atmosphere I had in mind for the film.

 Introducing the man (later given the name of John) was important for establish characters and character relationships in the film and the importance of them.

I start the characterisation process of Farah in the presentation by giving her a back story that is important in the film.

It was key that the flashbacks were mentioned in the presentation as they play an important role in the story-telling aspects of the film.

I chose to revel the emotional change of Farah to the audience as they were able to see the character change and the impact of such a change. 

Showing the reveal to the audience, I felt it would be important in order to gauge reaction and would open up suggestions as it is a key part of the film.

I felt a brief explanation into the plot would generate feedback into the ways of portraying such explanations in the film, it would also allow for changes and improvements in the structure and storytelling. 

Giving the audience an insight into who I was intending to aim my film at would allow them to think from the perspective of my target audience, therefore making the feedback more audience- orientated.

Giving examples of shots I had in mind would generate suggestions into more shots I could use for the film or possible improvements or changes of shots I had planned to use. 

I gave examples of dialogue in order for the audience to understand the style of writing I was using and they would be able to create the character of Farah better for themselves.

The tagline was used in order to create the style of advertising I was planning on using.